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Updated Mar 20, 2024

10 Tips for a High Score on the TOEFL Independent Writing Task

Hi everyone! If you’re applying to study in the US this year, have you started preparing for the TOEFL? The TOEFL is basically the must-have proof of English ability for studying in the US. If you’re still lost and don’t know how to prepare, practice the TOEFL Independent Writing task with Wordvice!


1. Practice timed writing

Writing an English assignment is completely different from writing a TOEFL essay on test day. With an assignment you have plenty of time to plan before you write, but under exam time limits you have to think fast, write fast and fix mistakes fast. Of course, you only get good at this with practice.

📌 Pick a topic, set a 30-minute timer and keep writing without stopping. When time is up, take a good look at what you wrote: how many grammar mistakes are there? How many complete sentences?

Practice this every week to get used to processing information quickly and typing it out. It will definitely help you write TOEFL essays faster and more completely.

2. Think quality, not length

A short, clear and precise answer makes a strong impression. That’s why we often see answers that score 4 or 5 with only one paragraph, while longer answers actually score lower.

📌 Put relevant reasons and details into one smooth paragraph using precise wording, and you’re done.

If your answer is too long, you’ll feel more rushed, won’t have time to check for mistakes, and are more likely to include filler or irrelevant content. That said, don’t make your answer so short that you can’t show off your strong argumentation skills.

3. Learn basic sentence patterns you can use with ease

TOEFL raters assess how well test takers use a variety of sentence structures.

📌 Collect some useful English linking words, such as “but,” “however,” and “although.” Use them flexibly when you practice TOEFL writing.

If you only use short sentences one after another, it’s harder to get a high score. We don’t need to become grammar experts, but we do need to show we can use many different sentence structures.

4. Practice common TOEFL prompts

You can’t choose your TOEFL prompt, and it often comes as a surprise. However, the TOEFL organizers publish sample prompts on their website.

Try to spot the keywords that keep appearing in prompts, like “prefer” or “oppose,” and make sure you understand what they mean and how to answer these questions. You can ask yourself: “Should I make a choice? Agree or disagree?” Once you notice the patterns, answering these prompts becomes a piece of cake.

📌 Make good use of past-question websites to find the patterns in how prompts are written, and you’ll be much better prepared.

5. Always state your own opinion

The TOEFL essay is an argumentative essay! So never say you have no opinion~ We know many people aren’t used to stating their opinions directly, but no matter what, you have to give your own opinion in the TOEFL essay!

📌 Whenever you hear or read anything, ask yourself: “Do I agree? Do I support this?” Then practice discussing it with friends. Practicing saying your opinion out loud makes it easier to write it down. On test day, pick the side you can argue better, or make one up, even if it isn’t what you really think.

6. Brainstorm before you answer

📌 After reading the prompt, spend 3 minutes writing down reasons for both sides and, if you can, supporting explanations and examples.

Pick one side and start writing. We suggest choosing the side with more supporting arguments and reasons; for the concession paragraph, one counterargument is enough.

7. Write a clear position statement

📌 Your thesis sentence must clearly say whether you agree or disagree. Don’t copy the prompt word for word; change the verb or use inversion to show the rater your writing ability. Then the opening of each following paragraph gives a reason and argument supporting the thesis, and serves as that paragraph’s topic sentence.

Example:

📌 Prompt: “In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?”

You could write: “I agree with the idea that for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students” or “I disagree the idea that for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students.”

8. Give specific reasons and details

Every prompt asks you to take a position on an issue and explain your view. Whether you score high depends on how convincing your supporting points are.

📌 For a higher score, you need at least three supporting reasons, and each one needs strong explanation and examples.

📌 It’s best not to use statistics unless you’re sure the numbers you know are accurate.

Many people can’t think of a suitable example on the spot, so we strongly recommend practicing plenty of past questions before the test. When you practice, draw on your own experience or general knowledge to support your argument.

9. Stay on topic

You’ll rarely get the exact prompt you practiced on test day, so just make sure your essay stays on topic.

The TOEFL checks essays for possible plagiarism. Some students memorize sample essays before the test and plug them into their essays instead of writing on their own. When your content doesn’t revolve around your thesis, you’re likely to get a low score.

📌 We don’t recommend memorizing sample essays; instead, do your best to stay on topic

If an unfamiliar word appears in the prompt, figure out its meaning from context, and never write anything unrelated to your core thesis — that will also pull your score down.

10. Check your essay if you have time

Even native speakers make mistakes when they write. A single check can catch spelling or grammar errors.

📌 Try to leave the last 1-3 minutes to review your essay and fix spelling and grammar; you’ll catch more mistakes that way.

Those are the ten tips for the TOEFL Independent Writing task~


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